I am a Year 3 student at Paparore School School in Northland, New Zealand. Mrs Davan is my teacher. My blog is a collection of my work at various stages, across different curriculum areas. Throughout my time at Paparore School I may share draft copies of my work for feedback and feed forward. Other times I will share my final published pieces. I would appreciate any feedback through leaving me a positive, thoughtful, helpful comment. Thank you.
Friday, September 4, 2020
My weekend story
On Sunday we had a trip to Mia's house to get her
work truck and back home. The truck was slow and
mum kept speeding six times. Pops truck was fast
as a Rhino and me and mum hopped in Mia's slow
truck. It went slow as a mouse. And when we got
home dad gave us a water bottle. Mum
gave us chips and we had a wonderful day.
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good work
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